Comments on: Wednesday December 8th

By: nik cloutier

nik cloutier — Mon, 13 Dec 2010 14:31:43 +0000

i just looked at the pome she wright and i though it was a beautiful pome….and do we have the conster tomaro….????

By: 4cranen

4cranen — Thu, 09 Dec 2010 01:11:15 +0000

Christine,

That was very thoughtful of you to add a comment about Breanna’s poem.

See you tomorrow,

Miss Crane

By: christine

christine — Thu, 09 Dec 2010 01:03:50 +0000

hi mrs crane i thisnk that poem is so cool
brianna has a sence of a good mind:]

By: 4cranen

4cranen — Thu, 09 Dec 2010 00:30:12 +0000

Breanna,

I liked your poem very much and it is very fitting for such an avid reader!

See you tomorrow,

Miss Crane

By: breanna

breanna — Wed, 08 Dec 2010 22:33:48 +0000

Hi mrs. crane well I decided to write a poem tell me if it’s good.
Books
She can hear the wind in the trees
whispering so softly
she can hear the ocean waves
very far away
she can hear the seagulls cry
all around the world
as she reads about them
in her book
soon she turns a new page and reads
” there’s no place like home’
she imagines someone reading to her
but it’s late
and it’s time for bed
she falls asleep
dreaming of the places
in her book.